that you left me
Sometimes, in moments of quiet solitude,the past catches up with you and holds your hand. -- dsnake1, Feb 2008
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that you left me
i was afraid
time will erase
your memories
your smiles
and i am
getting old
so today
i will just
write
some words
i cannot
send you
a card
like before
or take your
hands in mine
and point to
the stars
in the sky
take this as
a poem
for you
and if you
have read it
you will smile
and would
have cried.
28.01.08
********
This is for Poetry Picnic Week 34.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2012
image from imageafter.com
that you left me
i was afraid
time will erase
your memories
your smiles
and i am
getting old
so today
i will just
write
some words
i cannot
send you
a card
like before
or take your
hands in mine
and point to
the stars
in the sky
take this as
a poem
for you
and if you
have read it
you will smile
and would
have cried.
28.01.08
********
This is for Poetry Picnic Week 34.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2012
Labels: loneliness, love, lovesongs, Poetry, Poetry Picnic
posted by dsnake1 at 11:28 PM
10 Comments:
so today I will just write some words…this piece resonates with me so much. Thanks for sharing this.
thanks, Fred, for the visit and comments.
glad you liked this piece. :)
Sentimental and touching.
"or take your
hands in mine
and point to
the stars
in the sky"
There is such sweetness in that. It does ache just to read it in this poem's context.
thank you, Ravenblack.
it's supposed to be a sad, sentimental little poem. :)
Its the true feeling, i can understand it well..when we dont have the person we love wid us, we can write and it will be the biggest return if they had read it..
thank you, Ruchi Jain, for your kind comments. :)
yes, if she can, and had read it, she will understand.
wonderful writing
thank you, Ashok!
exploring the bond....
beautiful!
thank you, my friend. :)
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